The following presentation was about The Atlantic Slave Trade and it was an interesting presentation due to all the good evidence the presenters exhibited. I concluded that their thesis was good except i thought that maybe they could not be too specific when it came to evidence usage in the thesis statement. I think that they were being too specific on their thesis when it came to using their buckets. but other than that i thought they had a good presentation with good supporting facts that did prove their argument in their thesis. I learned that The Atlantic Slave Trade had to do with how they transported slaves and forced them into hard labor . but their presentation helped me develop an example of a good thesis .
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